He scurried along the road, as fast as his tiny legs would
carry him, trying to block everything happening around him. He was just beginning to feel slightly light and dry when, in his haste, he tripped on a pebble by the
sidewalk and fell face-first, nearly breaking his nose. With that familiar clap
of thunder, the dark cloud above his head unleashed another downpour upon his
already damp head.
He was tired of that obstinate rain cloud hovering above his
head. Every time he managed to shake it off, something seemed to happen to
provoke it to burst and pour once again. And he simply couldn’t figure out why
it followed him around, never targeting any of the other people around him. It
all began in the morning when he woke up to the sound of his mom yelling at him.
That was when the grey fluffs had begun to gather above him. As he quickly shoved
down his breakfast, there had ensued another mild scuffle with his older sister,
and he had felt the first drizzle of the gathered clouds and had hurried on his
way to school.
Feeling extremely ungainly and embarrassed, he picked
himself up after tripping on the pebble and trudged along in the rain, and somehow made it
to his classroom in the 2nd grade, fortunately without further
incident. The first class was his favourite, and the clouds progressively
started turning from grey to white. By the time it was recess, even the white
clouds had drifted a small distance away. He was running around and playing
with a few kids, almost oblivious to the reappearing haze, when suddenly –
lightning struck! It was the bully from 3rd grade. The clouds came
gliding back in unison, and with a boom of thunder, a fresh storm was under way.
Before he knew it, he was drenched from head to toe, and singed by lightning.
He sat in a corner of the playground, unable to escape the rain. Drenched and
soaking wet, he watched miserably as the other kids played, with the sun
shining merrily above them, bright as a day in summer. He shuddered slightly in
the cold.
He stayed well out of harm’s way through the rest of the day
and by evening, the torrents had reduced to a mild drizzle. He rushed out
thankfully at the end-of-day bell, and started walking home alone. His solitary
stroll did him good, and the rains stopped finally, and he started making plans
for his evening at home. That was when the next blow struck – he had a test the
next day and had completely forgotten about it until just then. He could almost
hear the clouds whizzing back to place, and this time, the deluge brought him
to the ground and he flopped down onto the pavement. He sat there for a while,
wallowing in self-pity and his hurricane. The persistent clouds beat down on him relentlessly, until
he felt like he could just give up and sit there forever. After a while, he stood up, shook himself, and resumed dragging his sodden self along the road towards his home again.
The gloom.. I guess Winter's coming.
ReplyDeleteTansen in 2nd grade...:) Well written, I should say this is one of your best. I see several layers in the narration that could be complicated. But its good this way - Short, simple with the right amount of GREY....though your protagonist wouldn't agree to that!:)
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